Topic is: cellobaise
Discussion Outline Suggestions for improvements?
Ø The hypothesis was supported/not supported.
• Elaborate to include data trends. “We expected___ and found ___.”
Ø Compare other studies.
• “Interestingly / in contrast / similarly, so and so (2000) found…”
Ø Describe limitations. (e.g. “Limitations of our experiment included user error.”)
• Instead try, “While we were able to make inferences about cellobiase activity in x and y mushrooms purchased at the grocery store, we were not able to make conclusions about…”
Ø Future directions. (e.g. “In the future, it would be possible to test more mushrooms and have more replicates.”)
• Instead try, “Future experiments could explore different species in natural settings to provide information about…”
